Gremlin house pet
Once upon a time one family was going to some place for few our their have a small pet,so they wanted to give pet their neibour.
Neibour have also two children, they played with pet a lot .At evening they came to bring their pet,but did not want to give them. Both children requested their parents and were agreed to clean it's potty and bath it also .Both children told their parents about benefit of pet. They will play ,eat,walk,run,talk,and teach it's.So finally their parent give pet as a pet.Both children were happy to see surprise gift, So children do all work together with it.
It is really good and your story is arranged in plot .
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Kanchan mam your story was very nice or you will work on spelling or punctuation or fan boys.
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